I Seek You 2.0 - Revision history

Ome: Fixing map display - removed openLayer configs

2023-12-22T16:50:17Z

Fixing map display - removed openLayer configs

Pam at 15:41, 8 December 2015

2015-12-08T15:41:06Z

Pam at 22:30, 29 November 2015

2015-11-29T22:30:33Z

Pam at 18:35, 26 May 2015

2015-05-26T18:35:46Z

Pam: /* UNDERGROUND MONITORING ROOM, BERN */

2015-05-25T20:48:42Z

UNDERGROUND MONITORING ROOM, BERN

Pam: /* ESPLANADE, AL MUKALLA, YEMEN */

2015-05-13T17:13:19Z

ESPLANADE, AL MUKALLA, YEMEN

Pam at 18:05, 11 May 2015

2015-05-11T18:05:27Z

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Pam: /* REEF MALL, AL MURAQQABAT, DUBAI */

2015-05-11T14:45:21Z

REEF MALL, AL MURAQQABAT, DUBAI

Pam at 21:06, 30 March 2015

2015-03-30T21:06:55Z

Pam at 16:16, 30 May 2013

2013-05-30T16:16:40Z

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 '''OUTLINE'''
-''As all involved run amok searching for clues to get a grasp on the situation they are caught in, their handlers back at base try to make sense of the sudden commotion.<br>
+''As all involved run amok searching for clues to get a grasp on the situation they are caught in. Their handlers back at base try to make sense of the sudden commotion.
 ''Now the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mossad Mossad], [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foreign_Intelligence_Service_%28Russia%29 Russia's SVR], [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ministry_of_State_Security_of_the_People%27s_Republic_of_China China's MSS] and even Switzerland's [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Strategic_Intelligence_Service FIS] are trailing their operatives.

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 [[Category:Episodes]]
-[[Category:The Venetian Cell|1.002]]
+[[Category:The Passengers|1.002]]
 [[Category:Follow the Money|1.002]]
 [[Category: The Age of Nujood (2010- )]]

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 DDD<br>
-So Nikitin has a mole in your department!
+So Nikitin has ears in your department!
 Carla<br>
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 ====INTERIOR TRAMWAY CAR, OLD BERN / INTERIOR FEDERAL PALACE CAFÉ, BERN====
-Feurer, on board a tram, is on the phone with Meier, sitting at the Federal Palace's Café.
+Feurer, aboard a tram, is on the phone with Meier who's sitting at the Federal Palace's Café.
 Feurer<br>
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 ====EXTERIOR, INTERDISCIPLINARY CENTER, HERZLIYA====
-Zvi waits on a bench outside a pavilion on the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interdisciplinary_Center IDC campus]. He seems busy texting on some Blackberry derivative as [[Gadi]] Oran walks to him.
+Zvi waits on a bench outside a pavilion on the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interdisciplinary_Center IDC campus]. He seems busy texting on some Blackberry derivative as [[Gadi|Gadi Oran]] walks to him.
 Zvi<br>
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 Guys like Hanin... They're going a great distance to find him. We're launching a full operation around some other guy, basically as a smoke screen.<br>
 (confidential)<br>
-He hasn't been in touch with you?
+Has he been in touch with you?
 Gadi<br>
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 Alexander<br/>
 (looking at the lines of tape on the floor)<br/>
-I told you, this is the new land of opportunities. They're going through their own [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Perestroika Perestroika]. And we're here to assist.
+I told you, this is the new land of opportunities. They're going through their own [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Perestroika Perestroika]. And we're here to help.
 Alexander pours two glasses from a bottle of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Russian_Standard_Vodka Russkiy Standart] on a makeshift table.
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 -Yeah she also passed when I was young.
--Oh... Sorry.
+-Oh, yes you mentioned it earlier... Sorry.
 -Well... That's fate, I'm an orphan...
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 -But for pronunciation, it's harder... What did he tell you?
--He saids ''Beautiful''
+-He said ''Beautiful''
 -I thought gay boys were not that open in Russia.
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 And you bring many foreign girls here?
-Karl leads Carla to a seating section of the club. Scores of top models sit around shiny white sofas as a Hip Hop beat triggers  strobe lights on the dance floor.
+Karl leads Carla to a seating section of the club. Scores of fashion model types sit around shiny white sofas as a Hip Hop beat triggers strobe lights on the dance floor.
 A young waitress attends to them as soon as they sit.
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 Karl<br>
-We've been working on this inter-agency case for months now... The Nikitin case. They've formed a team dedicated to taking him down and I've been assign to it by my department as a liaison officer... Although most of the time I feel more like an intern.
+We've been working on this inter-agency case for months now... The Nikitin case. They've formed a team dedicated to taking him down and I've been assigned to it by my department as a liaison officer... Although most of the time I feel more like an intern.
 Carla<br>
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 ====MEN'S ROOM, PROPAGANDA NIGHT CLUB, MOSCOW====
-Carla leans back on the wall on top of the toilet as the Russian Guy kisses her belly and starts zipping her pants down. Suddently, the mysterious by-stander/follower busts the door and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taser tases] him down.
+Carla leans back on the wall on top of the toilet as the Russian Guy kisses her belly and starts zipping down her pants. Suddenly, the mysterious by-stander/follower busts the door and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Taser tases] the Russian Guy down.
 Carla is shocked as she recognizes [[Uri]] who grabs her arm to pull her out.
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 ====FRONT DOOR, PROPAGANDA NIGHT CLUB, MOSCOW====
-The Waiter and Russian Guy run out of the club amidts comotion in the line up. As the Waiter pulls his cell and dials, the Russian Guy jumps on a parked Motorcycle and zooms out after the taxi.
+The Waiter and Russian Guy run out of the club amidst commotion in the line up. As the Waiter pulls his cell and dials, the Russian Guy jumps on a parked Motorcycle and zooms out after the taxi.
 ====INTERIOR TAXI, STREETS, MOSCOW====
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 Carla<br>
 (spaced out)<br>
-What's going on? I can't really stay awake...
+What's going on? I can't stay awake...
 Uri<br>
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 The sun shines through the red curtain as Carla opens her eyes. Still in a daze, she looks around the unfamiliar room and sees her suitcase on a the vanity. She hears a continuous banging but can't figure out where the noise comes from.
-She realizes that she is still dressed up as she stands to looks around for the bathroom. She finds her cell phone on top of her suitcase with its SIM card pulled out next to a hand written note.
+She realizes that she is still dressed up as she stands to looks around for the bathroom. She finds her cell phone on top of her suitcase with its [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SIM_card SIM card] pulled out next to a hand written note.
 STAY OFF THE GRID - URI
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 Man<br>
 (in Russian, upset)<br>
-It's already 2:00! We've been knocking for half an hour... What's wrong with you!
+It's already 2:00 pm! We've been knocking for half an hour... What's wrong with you!
 Carla<br>
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 ====INTERIOR, SWISS FLIGHT 987, TARMAC, MOSCOW====
-Carla places her [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SIM_card SIM card] back in her cell.
+Carla places her SIM card back into her cell.
 Loads of [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SMS SMS] and missed calls messages pop up.
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 Najwa<br>
 (Standing)<br>
-I feel like dancing... (looking at Fan) You coming?
+I feel like dancing... (looking at Fan) You're coming?
 Fan glances towards Viktor, hesitating, before leaving the table with Najwa.
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 I don't look at the Gulf... I look at Iran.
-She gets to him and slides naked in his arm.
+She gets to him and slides naked into his arm.
 Najwa<br>
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 Meier<br/>
-We were basically following a thread, the Botulinum case, that she had lead us on to. I had no idea weather or not she had seek police protection.
+We were basically following a thread, the Botulinum case, that she had led us on to. I had no idea weather or not she had seek police protection.
 FDFA Councillor<br/>
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 FIS Director<br/>
-We're trying to get answers directly from Mossad but they seem have lost touch with him as well.
+We're trying to get answers directly from Mossad but they seem to have lost touch with him as well.
 ====YATOM FAMILY HOME, WEST-JERUSALEM====
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 ====ALEXANDER'S OFFICE, 60th FLOOR, RUSSIAN MIDDLE-EASTERN BANK====
-Alexander and Viktor sit around Alexander's ping pong table along with [[Marina]] Krilova, early 30s, the bank's new Controller and Head of Business Affairs.
+Alexander and Viktor sit around Alexander's ping pong table along with [[Marina|Marina Krilova]], early 30s, the bank's new Controller and Head of Business Affairs.
 Marina<br>
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 Marina<br>
 (exhaling and referring to the challenge)<br>
-Well, give me a few days to understand how things work and who's who around here. If all goes well, we should be operational within weeks.
+Well, give me a few days to understand how things work and who's who around here. If all goes well, we should be operational within a few weeks.
 Alexander<br>
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 Fan<br>
-Well maybe we should hook up somewhere a little more classy then. Not like if that's what's missing in Dubai.
+Well maybe we should hook up somewhere a little more classy then. Not like if that's what's missing here in Dubai.
 [[The_Zytglogge_Mission|<< PREVIOUS EPISODE]] -- [[London_Calling|NEXT EPISODE >>]]

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 Meier looks amused.
--An intoxicated Russian! Word from [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Herzliya Herzliya] is that he's gone AWOL!
+-An intoxicated Russian! There's a oxymoron, I mean, a pleonasm... Anyways, word from [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Herzliya Herzliya] is that our good Samaritan has gone AWOL!
 -They're playing us...

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 -Great... And what's your plan for diesel?
--Well, we still got the captain's box... and the mail trunk... and we have way enough fuel to reach Suez. There we can hook up with your friend, [[Mister John]]. For sure he'll find a buyer, no?
+-Well, we still got the captain's box... and the mail trunk... and we have way enough fuel to reach Suez. There we can hook up with [[Mister John]]. For sure he'll find a buyer, no?
 Pierrot snaps out of his blues.

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 You're forgetting your bag!
-Fan doesn't understand but then sees her plastic bag and smiles back at the two young ladies.
+Fan doesn't understand but then sees her plastic bag containing the cheap underwear and smiles back at the two young ladies.
 Other Filipina Lady<br>

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 ====ESPLANADE, AL MUKALLA, YEMEN====

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 Ladies and Gentlemen, we are now ready for take off. Please make sure that your seat-belt is fasten and cell phone turned off. All electronic equipment shall now be turned off until we reach our cruising altitude. Thank you. (repeat message in English...)
-Carla presses redial on Gunter's number as she hears the announcement.
+Carla presses redial on Feurer's number as she hears the announcement.
 Carla<br>
 (quietly)<br>
-Gunter!
+Feurer!
 Carla looks at the incoming attendant.