The Zytglogge Mission - Revision history

Ome: Fixing map display - removed openLayer configs

2023-12-22T16:45:58Z

Fixing map display - removed openLayer configs

Pam: /* TRAIN STATION, BUCHS, ST. GALLEN */

2015-12-11T16:11:17Z

TRAIN STATION, BUCHS, ST. GALLEN

Pam: /* MORNING, INTERIOR, DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE AND POLICE, BERN */

2015-12-08T19:09:52Z

MORNING, INTERIOR, DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE AND POLICE, BERN

Pam at 22:29, 29 November 2015

2015-11-29T22:29:26Z

Pam: /* EXTERIOR/INTERIOR, SERVICE AREA, URI, SWITZERLAND */

2015-11-27T17:28:26Z

EXTERIOR/INTERIOR, SERVICE AREA, URI, SWITZERLAND

Pam at 16:46, 27 May 2015

2015-05-27T16:46:48Z

Pam: /* INTERIOR, FRANZISKA'S APARTMENT, BERN */

2015-05-25T20:34:28Z

INTERIOR, FRANZISKA'S APARTMENT, BERN

Pam: /* EXTERIOR, WINERY, LAVAUX, VAUD */

2015-05-25T20:32:43Z

EXTERIOR, WINERY, LAVAUX, VAUD

Pam: /* EXTERIOR, WINERY, LAVAUX, VAUD */

2015-05-25T20:24:41Z

EXTERIOR, WINERY, LAVAUX, VAUD

Pam: /* WALKING OUT OF THE BELLEVUE HOTEL */

2015-05-25T18:57:42Z

WALKING OUT OF THE BELLEVUE HOTEL

@@ Line 11: / Line 11: @@
 {{
 #display_map:14.333333, 50.416667
-| service=openlayers
+| zoom=5
 }}

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 ====TRAIN STATION, BUCHS, ST. GALLEN====
-Uri is looking at a photo of Carla on his phone then stares through the train's window as a speaker voice announce the departure of the train bound for Schaan, Liechtenstein.
+Uri stares through the train's window as a speaker voice announce the departure of the train bound for Schaan, Liechtenstein.
 ====EXTERIOR, ROAD, LAVAUX REGION, VAUD====

@@ Line 93: / Line 93: @@
 A replay of the opening scene through various city surveillance cameras which extends to Uri crossing the Kirchenfeld bridge aboard a black Alfa Romeo Giulietta.
-====MORNING, INTERIOR, DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE AND POLICE, BERN====
+====MORNING, INTERIOR, DEPARTMENT OF JUSTICE, BERN====
 Carla gets to her office late to pick up documents. A young female Assistant is busy gathering them into a rolling briefcase. Carla fires up her laptop and notices that she's late.

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 [[Category:Episodes]]
-[[Category:The Venetian Cell|1.001]]
+[[Category:The Passengers|1.001]]
 [[Category:Follow the Money|1.001]]
 [[Category:The Age of Nujood (2010- )]]

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 ====EXTERIOR/INTERIOR, SERVICE AREA, URI, SWITZERLAND====
-[[File:1000px-Flag_of_Canton_of_Uri.png|thumb|right|480px|Flag of Canton of Uri]]
+[[File:1000px-Flag_of_Canton_of_Uri.png|thumb|right|240px|Flag of Canton of Uri]]
 As he reaches a highway service area, Uri parks and waits in his car until he notices the flashing headlights from a car parked on the opposite side of the highway. He picks up the stolen umbrella and crosses the austere pedestrian tunnel where he notices the emblem of the Canton of Uri, a cow's head with a buckle through the nostrils.

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 '''OUTLINE'''
-''[[Carla]] Xanthis, a Swiss prosecutor investigating the banking transactions of a Russian pipeline company, is the target of a failed assassination attempt as she leaves her old Bern home for work. Oblivious to what happened, she is secretly contacted by [[Uri]] Yatom, the renegade [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mossad Mossad] [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Katsa Katsa] who saved her life.
+''[[Carla|Carla Xanthis]], a Swiss prosecutor investigating the banking transactions of a Russian pipeline company, is the target of a failed assassination attempt as she leaves her old Bern home for work. Oblivious to what happened, she is secretly contacted by [[Uri|Uri Yatom]], the renegade [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mossad Mossad] [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Katsa Katsa] who saved her life.
-''Back in the Middle East, [[Alexander]] Nikitin, the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_oligarch Russian Oligarch] who heads the pipeline company, transfers his operations to Dubai where he purchases a bank. He moves to the Emirate with his key staff and [[Najwa]], his Palestinian/Iranian girlfriend.
+''Back in the Middle East, [[Alexander|Alexander Nikitin]], the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_oligarch Russian Oligarch] who heads the pipeline company, transfers his operations to Dubai where he purchases a bank. He moves to the Emirate with his key staff and [[Najwa|Najwa Nilufar]], his Palestinian/Iranian girlfriend.
 ''The plot thickens as the characters involved cross reference transactions and individuals.

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 Carla collapses into Franziska's arms.
--I'm scared Franzi... I'm scared.
+-I'm scared Franzi... I'm so scared.
 ====FRANZISKA'S LIVING ROOM, BERN====

@@ Line 813: / Line 813: @@
 -I don't know, I've been in and out of it since then. This thing is killing me. Get me something fast.
-Viktor moves closer to Boris and chokes him with one hand. Boris convulses for several seconds then rests inert.
+Viktor gets closer to Boris, moves his right hand up his chest reaches his neck, and chokes him. Boris convulses for several seconds then rests inert.
 Viktor carries the body outside and dumps it in a dry well. He unties the German Shepherd which remains still, then drives away as the sun is setting over the French Alps on the opposite side of the lake.

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 ====EXTERIOR, WINERY, LAVAUX, VAUD====
-Viktor parks his car on the side of a narrow road overlooking a winery and crosses the vines towards the back entrance of the main building. No one's in sight except for a leashed up barking German Shepherd. He enters the cellar which doesn't appear to have been used in years and hears someone calling. As his sight adjusts to the darkness, he discovers a man lying on a makeshift bed. It's Boris who's agonizing.
+Viktor parks his car on the side of a narrow road overlooking a winery and crosses the vines towards the back entrance of the main building. No one's in sight except for a barking leashed up German Shepherd. He enters the cellar which doesn't appear to have been used in years and hears someone calling. As his sight adjusts to the darkness, he discovers a man lying on a makeshift bed. It's Boris who's agonizing.
 -Here... Here...

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 Carla looks at Feurer as they walk out of the hotel.
--So we do have a secret service after all.
+-So we do have a spy agency after all.
 -Not officially...